Thing I Like to Do ( essay )

EAT

          
 As everyone knows, eat is one of the most important thing in life. To survive, we as a living things really need to eat. Based on several research, eat can make someone’s life happier. So do I, I feel so much better after I eat my food, especially sweet things.

I have a lot of  favorite foods. Start from the appetizer,  my favorite food is chicken stripes and french fries and of course with chili sauce. For the main course, i like fried rice and noodles. For the last, dessert I really like matcha ice cream.

My favorite place to eat is Pantai Indah Kapuk because it’s quiet close from my house and in that area there are a lot of restaurants that means I also have a lot of option. Actually, Bandung is also my favorite place to eat because in there we can find so many delicious food whether it’s traditional food or not, but I rarely go there because Bandung is do far from my house.

Usually, I eat with my family at my home. Of course the food is made by my mom and for your information, my mom’s food is freaking good. I also eat with my
friends, but usually we eat at restaurant or cafe.


So for the conclusion, eat is an important thing in life and a thing that can make us happy. J

Comments

  1. UnknownJune 5, 2017 at 6:37 PM

    It is a nice post but there are some mistakes. for a suggestion, please mind

    your grammar
    the typos
    the fourth paragraph doesnt have concluding sentence
    the last sentence in the fourth paragraph is not related to the main topic

    for the assignments, se have to do structure outlines and post it here(opening, 1st major sentence, etc...)

    those are suggestions from me. thank you

    -J.RISHIKESAN-

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  2. UnknownJune 5, 2017 at 7:39 PM

    It's a good pharagrpah, but in the last pharagaraoh your conclusion to simple and not really related with your main topic. But so far so good

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  3. UnknownJune 6, 2017 at 11:23 AM

    [REVISED]

    EAT
    As everyone knows, eating is one of the most important thing in life. To survive, we are as living things really need to eat. Based on several research, eat can make someone’s life happier. So do I, I feel so much better after I eat my favorite food at my favorite places with people who use to eat with me.

    I have a lot of favorite foods. Start from the appetizer, my favorite food is chicken stripes and French fries and of course with chili sauce. For the main course, i like fried rice and noodles. For the dessert I really like matcha ice cream. So after all I love many kinds of food.

    I have many favorite place to eat. My first favorite place to eat is Pantai Indah Kapuk. I like to eat there because it’s quiet close from my house. The other reason is in that area there are a lot of restaurants that means I also have a lot of option. My second favorite place to eat is Bandung because, that city have a lot of delicious food whether it’s traditional food or not. I still have more places to eat but Pantai Indah Kapuk and Bandung is my most favorite place.

    I used to eat with some several specific people. One of those several specific people that I mentioned before are my family. We eat homemade food cooked by my mom. Other than my family, I also eat with my friends. When I am with my friends, we usually eat at restaurant or cafe. In the end, from many people I know, my family and my friends are my most favorite food mate.

    So for the conclusion, eating makes me happy. Not only eating my favorite food but also eating it in my favorite place with my favorite people.









    Main topic: Thing that I like to do
    Introduction Paragraph
    Thesis statement: I feel so much better after I eat my favorite food at my favorite places with people who use to eat with me.

    Paragraph 1: My favorite food
    Topic sentence: I have a lot of favorite foods.
    Major support 1: Listening to music improves my mood drastically as it helps me to pass some time.
    Major support 2:
    Conclusion sentence: In the end, listening to music is an activity that I really love to do.

    Paragraph 2: My favorite place to eat
    Topic sentence: I have many favorite place to eat.
    Major support 1: . My first favorite place to eat is Pantai Indah Kapuk.
    Minor support 1 : . I like to eat there because it’s quiet close from my house. The other reason is in that area there are a lot of restaurants that means I also have a lot of option.
    Major support 2: My second favorite place to eat is Bandung because, that city have a lot of delicious food whether it’s traditional food or not.
    Conclusion sentence: I still have more places to eat but Pantai Indah Kapuk and Bandung is my most favorite place.

    Paragraph 3: My favorite food mate.
    Topic sentence I used to eat with some several specific people.
    Major support 1: One of those several specific people that I mentioned before are my family.
    Minor support : We eat homemade food cooked by my mom.
    Major support 2: Other than my family, I also eat with my friends.
    Minor support : When I am with my friends, we usually eat at restaurant or café.
    Conclusion sentence: In the end, from many people I know, my family and my friends are my most favorite food mate.

    Concluding paragraph:
    So for the conclusion, eating makes me happy. Not only eating my favorite food but also eating it in my favorite place with my favorite people.

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