Thing I Like to Do
EAT
As
everyone knows, eat is one of the most important thing in life. To survive, we
as a living things really need to eat and also for me eating a delicious food
can makes me happy, that’s why I like to
eat. My favorite foods are cheese, fried rice, mochi, and especially ice cream.
Why I like to eat ice cream is because it is sweet and cold. It’s really a good
option in this summer season. My favorite place to eat is Pantai Indah Kapuk
because it’s quiet close from my house and in that area there are a lot of
restaurants that means I also have a lot of option. Actually, Bandung is also
my favorite place to eat because in there we can find so many delicious food
whether it’s traditional food or not, but I rarely go there because Bandung is
do far from my house. Usually, I eat with my family but if I want to try
something new, I rather eat with my friends. So that’s a thing I like to do and
also makes me happy.:)
main topic : Eat
subtopic : My favorite food, my favorite place to eat, my food mate
main topic : Eat
subtopic : My favorite food, my favorite place to eat, my food mate
Hello pingky!
ReplyDeleteYour fav thing to do is really expectable since I knew it for long time you do enjoy eating a lot! I also like to try something new with my friends. It's a nice post though. Have a good day:)
hay wid! thankyou for your comment. okay let's find a new place to eat hahahah
DeleteIt is a very refreshing paragraph you have there.
ReplyDeleteAs a suggestion, please use the word eating in the 1st line and please fix some typo such as quiet need to be changed to quite and the word do need to be changed to so.
After all it is sitl a very nice paragraph. a good job well done.
thankyou rishi for your correction :)
Deletehello pingky!
ReplyDeleteyou're thing like to do have quite similar with me haha like try to something new, can we explore together? :) . Nice post btw, but like rishi said there are some typo on you're post. Hope that you can revise soon. Cheers ;)
of course hafifahh ahahah thankyouuu for your comment
DeleteHey ex classmate
ReplyDeleteI like the way you explain briefly and clearly about think that you like to do. Nice post but do not forget to workout ping: p
hay rii!! duh, later later lol thankyou btw for your comment :)
DeleteHello Pingky, nice blog. But I though I found some typo , in the " is do far from my house. " Did you mean that " is so far from my house. "
ReplyDeleteI think that's it, good job girl. Keep writting !
thankyou vena for your correction hehehe :)
Deletehi, i think it's a good paragraph. but, i think it supposed to be "i'd rather" and there is some typo in there like "it is too far from here". another thing is, u can use some photos or hyperbolic words to make it more entertaining to me as a reader. and btw, you like to eat so many food. i wonder how fat are u now. hahaha jk. keep writing and goodluck!
ReplyDeletethankyou jovan :) and fyi, i am not that fat okayyyy HAHAH jk
Deletehello Pingky Kharamoy :).
ReplyDeleteI think it's a good blog, for the first post, it's very satisfying for me, everything you described is good , keep writing and good luck ping :)
don't forget my blog wkwk
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thankyou rizky hahahah already loh yaa
DeleteIt's good pharagrpah and you told about your experience clearly and easy understanding.
ReplyDeleteFor the next you can fix the typo words. But i think so far so good
thankyou for your comment ka :)
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ReplyDeleteMain topic : Eat
Sub topic : My favorite food, My favorite place to eat, and My food mate.
THING THAT I LIKE TO DO
According Cambrige dictionary, definition of eat is to put or take food into the mouth, chew it crush it, and swallow it. As everyone knows, eating is one of the most important thing in life. To survive, we as a living things really need to eat and also for me eating a delicious food can makes me happy, that’s why I like to eat. My favorite foods are cheese, fried rice, mochi, and especially ice cream. Why I like to eat ice cream is because it is sweet and cold. It’s really a good option in this summer season. My favorite place to eat is Pantai Indah Kapuk because it’s quite close from my house and in that area there are a lot of restaurants that means I also have a lot of option. Actually, Bandung is also my favorite place to eat because in there we can find so many delicious food whether it’s traditional food or not, but I rarely go there because Bandung is so far from my house. Usually, I eat with my family but if I want to try something new, I’d rather eat with my friends. So that’s a thing I like to do and also makes me happy.
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