Important Building in Indonesia
GEDUNG SATE, BANDUNG
Gedung Sate is a landmark building of Bandung. This building was constructed 97
years ago on 27th of July. The architecture of Gedung Sate is a work of Ir. J.
Gerber and around 2.000 people were involved in this construction. After four
years in September 1924, the construction is finished. Maybe you are curious
why is it look like a satay? Well
actually the satay's stick and 6 ornaments on the top of Gedung Satay is mean
the time of the construction, Dutch Government took 6 million guldier (gulden). Of course every building has their
own function, for now the main function of Gedung Sate is head
office for West Java government but because its popularity, this building also
became a tourist attraction. In conclusion, Gedung Sate is one of Indonesia's
important building and also historical.
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ReplyDeletehi pingky! it is a nice post there. for me, since at this post you mentioned things such as the history of this building and the explanation of the top of this building , i think that you should focus in one of them and continue it by using either chronological logic ( if you choose the history) or spatial logic ( if you choose the top of the building ) therefore your paragraph will have a better coherence . nice post
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hello, it is a good paragraph i think. i think on the 6th sentence u could add a cohesion device like "... on the top of this building means the time....." other than that, it's nice i think
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ReplyDeleteGedung Sate is a landmark building of Bandung that located at Jl. Diponegoro No. 22. This building was constructed 97 years ago on 27th of July. The architecture of Gedung Sate is a work of Ir. J. Gerber, Eh. De Roo, and G. Hendriks. Around 2.000 people were involved in this construction. After four years in September 1924, the construction is finished.D. Ruhl mentioned Gedung Sate is the most beautiful building in Indonesia in the book Bandoeng en haar Hoogvlakte from 1952. Of course every building has their own function, for now the main function of Gedung Sate is head office for West Java government but because its popularity, this building also became a tourist attraction. In conclusion, Gedung Sate is one of Indonesia's important building and also historical.
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