My Last Holiday



My Last Holiday


About 1 year ago I went to Pontianak, as I can remember that was my last holiday with my family. For your information, Pontianak is my hometown but I rarely go there and sadly we only spent 5 days in Pontianak because my dad have to go back to work.The reason we go to Pontianak not only for holiday, but we also visiting our grandma and also we stay in her house. 5 days in Pontianak caused me to gain weight as big as 2 kg. Almost everynight we go out and find a place to eat. One of my favorite food is choi pan. Choi pan is the traditional fod from Pontianak, it is made by corn flour and rice flour and for the filling usually they put vegies or jicama (bengkoang).

Choi Pan

And of course, we also go to Equator Monument which is the landmark of Pontianak. Although, it was only 5 days in Pontianak but that was a freat short holiday with my family.

Equator Monument 

Comments

  1. You still got a typo in your writing. But when i see your pharagraph it is okay. You can improve it again

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  2. heyo pink!
    Your paragraph is good, but as abdul said, there's a typo . Hope that you can revise it soon:)

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  3. Hi Pink
    Your paragraph is well written already, but if you can, please add more info on the equator monument as it caught my interest.

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  4. [REVISED]

    MY LAST HOLIDAY
    About 1 year ago I went to Pontianak, as I can remember that was my last holiday with my family. For your information, Pontianak is my hometown but I rarely go there and sadly we only spent 5 days in Pontianak because my dad have to go back to work.The reason we go to Pontianak not only for holiday, but we also visiting our grandma and also we stay in her house. 5 days in Pontianak caused me to gain weight as big as 2 kg. Almost every night we go out and find a place to eat. One of my favorite food is choi pan. Choi pan is the traditional food from Pontianak, it is made by corn flour and rice flour and for the filling usually they put vegetables or jicama (bengkoang).

    And of course, we also go to Equator Monument which is the landmark of Pontianak. It marks the division between the northern and southern hemispheres. Although, it was only 5 days in Pontianak but that was a great short holiday with my family.

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